Yes!
Once I saw those robots with glow sticks, It became clear in my mind that I was going to 10/10 this. This video was really great. The song was nice to listen to and the video was nice to watch. And the orphanage joke made me laugh. Definitely front page worthy. Although the art was a bit lacking while they were being animated, it was still great. Rated 5/5. 10/10 stars.
Yes.
Wonderful work with the light. I like it! Was not expecting that to be a bug, though.
Hm..
It was a very funny flash. But, your animation for their mouths could use some work. Other than that, good work.
Yeah, I didn't really even attempt to sync the mouths... lol... for sure, the next round I'll be spending more time crafting the details.
Oh my..
NO ONE TOLD ME THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM WHEN YOU WISHED ON THEM!! D:
I'm a murderer! But anyways, I kept the flash open until it came to the replay screen and it screamed at me. ]:
Video Literacy strikes again.
Sorry, Harry. 9/10 for this video. I noticed that while the girl was eating the cake, the cherry was off on the side of the plate, but then throughout the rest of the video, it's on the top of it. Things like that are small and hard to notice, but don't necessarily ruin it. It just makes it fun to look for em'. Like in the movie Max Payne. At the end when he's on the rooftop on his knees with his gun next to him, the camera changes to the front of him and his gun is behind him. It just gives people conversation. But this video was very entertaining. Nick's faces made me laugh through all of it. Good work.
Oh my.
Mario gave it to Peach in the face. Nuff' said.
Ah, so you have caught on to the symbolism. Nice.
You got me.
When it came to the end of the flash and the cat said the predictable pun, I sat there for a good minute waiting for something to happen. But as others have said, I am curious as to what's going to happen next. Maybe an introduction to a protagonist? But your drawings and animations are quite good. They seem to be set off all on their own, but the cat did give me a sense of the Cheshire cat from Alice in Wonderland. Probably because of the face, only more ferocious looking.
But please, continue. I look forward to see more/
Excellent.
The story running along with this is great. I definitely like how you've pit the corporation versus the ethics of the church and continued further to corrupt them.
I hope in the next flash that the motives of the corporate side are shown. Although in the beginning it explains what they've done, but only a vague overshadow. It still kind of leaves you floating there on why the church dislikes them. But this had a wonderful mix of hilarity and action. I noticed on the molotov scene that the guy with the yin-yang eyepatch had ":3" on his shirt.
Also, the detail through the sequences was tremendous. I have to say my favorite part would be in the fight scene when the camera zooms in to the teeth of the one that flies towards it. And you seemed to keep your characters well proportioned through it too.
I can't really tell you much to improve on that hasn't already been touched on with you, but it was a great flash.
Well, well, well.
So you go onto other people's videos(Beast Snacks) and trash it for all it's worth?
This video is no better, in fact, the drawing in beast snacks was much better. And I realize how old this is, but don't make comments on the work of others if you have nothing better to show.
Lol, I made this when I was in eighth or ninth grade, he made "beast snacks" at the age of 26. I think you'll understand my point. Anyways this is now a junk account. I stopped making flash movies, and I've been accepted into calarts for character animation. He on the other hand is very bad, and I'm making better things then him, and I'm 9 years younger! So yeah he would get laughed out if he pitched a cartoon, or applied for Disney. Yeah, I was a dick, and its probably because I made crappy cartoons and I know how it feels. People were jerks to me, and some people were nice. The jerks helped me realize my mistakes, and I became better.
PM me if you want to continue our little conversation. :D
I'm shocked and appalled.
All of these hateful reviews are just nonsense to me. Reading all of these reviews actually forced me to make an account on this website. All of you who hate on these videos that you dub, "crappy" are the real reason that many people don't like making things. Your words are so painful and destructive to the effort they put into their work that they give up. I gave this video the highest voting that I possibly could in spite of all of you bombers. So Newgrounds has been putting new things on the front page. And? Things are put on the front page because they're creative and entertaining. Just because the art, comedy, voice acting or story aren't as good as an EgoRaptor animation, doesn't mean it isn't good. You all base things on, "Is this better than something EgoRaptor could do?" I'm just sick of it. Honestly, for this user to get their hard work and toil put on the front page, that's just karma working against you. I found this video mildly entertaining. I mean sure, the animation could have been better. But it's a learning process. That's what reviews are for, to help the author improve. Not degrade them in front of everyone. So get all of your bombing bullshit out of here.
In regards to the animation, Nathan. I loved the video very much. It took me back to my days sitting on the floor in front of my television waiting for Dragon Ball to come on. Although others say they hate seeing that in the video, I thank you for it. Seeing the remnants of your childhood in something really take you back. Your animation could be better for when they speak though and you should keep in mind of proportioning their bodies through a scene. Video literacy can be harsh, but can cause you to make wonderful things when you apply it to your next creation. The music was great too, but I think there's other people I should praise for that, but it was your choice of what to use! I look forward to the arrival of episode two.
Keep drawing and animating, don't let the bombers get you down. Chin up.
-Andy
Thanks for this, sometimes a bomb on my happy parade weighs me down, especially when I know I gave it my all, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope to see you back for episode 2!
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